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A Tiny Effort

Dawn Wang
2 min readDec 20, 2023

-December 20, 2023 -071

All my negative thoughts are like
Those black clouds,
Blind my eyes,
Above my head,
They give me gloomy feelings,
They block the way I see sunshine.

They intercept me receiving
The feeling of God’s love,
They intercept me
Getting the true love
From the people around me,
So we are all in the dark.

We cannot see the truth,
We cannot feel what is real,
But deep in our hearts,
We know that feeling,
The feeling makes us
Having a true smile.

The feeling gives us so much energy
To live a joyful life,
That feeling is from God,
It’s just concealed
By our negative thoughts,
By the black clouds.

So when we know the truth,
We are determined
To see the light,
We are determined
To have that sunshine
Shining through our life.

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Dawn Wang
Dawn Wang

Written by Dawn Wang

A poet, like a bluejay trying to make you happy, I can make it if you see me every day, and you talk to me as you wish, I'd love to sing to respond to the voice

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